"Peer review of I am"

I peer reviewed Raymond's blog and found out many things about him. While I was reading his blog I was very interested to know what type of person he is and what he is all about. In his I learned a lot about Raymond. I from reading his blog it sounds like he is a family but is sometimes annoyed by his little brother and maybe that's why it seems like he wants his brother to go to Texas over the summer. Additionally I learned that wants his four year experience at ITHS to be a very successful one even though he lives in Brooklyn he believes that is was worth coming to ITHS and so do I. On his free time he like to go on myspace, playing football, riding his bike, hanging out with his friends and visiting his ex girlfriend which he is taking time out to recover from but I believe that he will find another girl that's right from him.


I believe that the way Raymond wrote his blog was very professional and it only had like one spelling mistake. His type of writing reads very smoothly allowing one concepts leads to the next which means that his writing is very easy to read and he has good paragraph strucuture. The only thing that i believe would make his blog better is if he added what is his background and some information about the junior high school he graduated from otherwise I really liked his blog and I believe that other people should read it.